That's much better (though I'm sad to see Joe's intimate shot leave). I admit that I'm prejudiced against sentences in a scholarly work beginning with conjunctions. I think that in various forms of fiction, they work well when properly used. In a scholarly piece, IMHO, they should be used...
Unfortunately, intelligence and ability to write don't necessarily go together. I used to think that a love of reading helped make one a good writer, but that's a fallacy, too. Has anyone spoken to him about working with an editor? Hopefully, your & Joe's photos will carry the book.
The photos are, of course, stunning. I know that you said you moved the photo credits as was suggested by Michael. I would assume that there is a page for acknowledgements & photo credits could go there instead.
Nice to see some of Joe's work. The writing, however, could use a good editor. I had to read some of the sentences a couple of times to figure out what he was trying to say.
Great effort, Oliver! I prefer the Lower shot as it doesn't have the shadow of the bridge. I admit I have mixed feelings about the Moonbows shots: hard to come by & I appreciate the effort in getting the shots, but most people process them so that it looks like daytime. Your sky is a deep...
There is an issue with Uploading Photos (attachjments). I am not sure what the problem is, and I am looking into it. You can still try to Create your Threads and Upload your Photos, but it is hanging up during the Upload.