Hey John, I will comment on your photo a little bit later, but let me second Ben’s comments here. Especially if you have a photo that for whatever reason you (or anyone) just can’t get to feel right, putting it into the Critique forum is a fun place to put the original raw photo and let others play with it and make suggestions. It makes for a really fun community event.
Now for some people, maybe they are too sensitive, or maybe it’s an ego thing, but if you look through past critiques or Let’s Play threads, you (or anyone) will see all suggestions are made because people care. And of course we won’t all agree with all suggestions, but the effort by everyone in the community means that everyone not just the OP of the thread gets to learn some new things, and that’s really cool.
Also if you look back at the Let’s Play a couple of weeks ago, you will see that I submitted a Upper Yosemite falls shot that I just couldn’t get to feel right, and it was awesome to see several of the people (Kyle and Darcy) come up with 2 versions of it that I really liked.
If you do ever want to submit a photo for Let’s Play, just contact Ben or myself.