What could I do to improve this?

[Darcy Grizzle]

Ken & Ben thank you for the input . I do see some funky clouds in both of yours but that is probably from the jpg, at the left top above the peak. I did do a bw version which I am liking pretty much. You guys have given me some things I am going to go back & try , thank you!

 

[Ben Egbert]

Thanks Darcy, yes I saw the blown out area which was probably from working with a JPG.