Roots need some Critique

[JimFox]

Very cool Amy! I like the look of it. After Alan and Ben bringing up the curved root being. Distraction, I am not sure I like it anymore. I wonder if it could be auto filled away in yours and look seamless?

 

[Ben Egbert]

Not really a B&W guy. but I like your version Amy. I might crop the bottom to eliminate that lower left root.

 

[Carlo Didier]

I'm a little late to the party, but here is my thought.
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Excellent job, Amy!