Neon Sign near the hills - Tight and wide

[David S]

200mm vs35mm

 

[AlanLichty]

How about #2 with a slight crop on the right to lose the lamp. I like the isolated letters in the first one but it feels like there are too many reflections. The second one has an interesting offset that lets the brickwork on the right stand out but I find the wall lamp a bit distracting.

 

[David S]

How about #2 with a slight crop on the right to lose the lamp. I like the isolated letters in the first one but it feels like there are too many reflections. The second one has an interesting offset that lets the brickwork on the right stand out but I find the wall lamp a bit distracting.

I’ll try that and post it here. I thought the ground helped to give some reference point to the 1st one ; but the lamp maybe totally unneeded ! Also I’ll see if I can get rid of the more noticeable reflections

 

[JimFox]

Hey Dave, that's a cool sign. Alan said exactly my thoughts.