Approaching storm Hunts Mesa
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Linda Combs
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This is very pretty!
AlanLichty
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Well done. I like the comp focus on the branch and the rain shafts are delightful
Kyle Jones
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Great depth Bob! The branch really anchors it for me.
BarryHamilton
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Great view! I want to make it up there some day!
Beautiful
Ryan10
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Well done. Great fore, middle, and backgrounds. Nice contrast of nature.
My one improvement suggestion per post.
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I'd like to see the entire foreground branch fit within the foreground hill you're on. The top of the branch is cutting into the middle of the image.
My one improvement suggestion per post.
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I'd like to see the entire foreground branch fit within the foreground hill you're on. The top of the branch is cutting into the middle of the image.
Hey Bob,
What a sweet shot, and you definitely have some nice separation and depth going on here. I know from being there, that the sun can really make those colors get cooked. If I were to make 1 suggestion it would be to pull back just slightly on the yellows on the ground layer. Not a lot, but I would pull them back just a bit.
Jim
What a sweet shot, and you definitely have some nice separation and depth going on here. I know from being there, that the sun can really make those colors get cooked. If I were to make 1 suggestion it would be to pull back just slightly on the yellows on the ground layer. Not a lot, but I would pull them back just a bit.
Jim
Pete Van Hamersveld
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Nice rich color. Like contrast of the calm present about to be changed with the upcoming future.
Martín el Escocés
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Very beautiful combination of different elements, Bob. Lovely shot. I wondered if you had a wider view of the storm over the Mesa?