Bob Israel
Well-Known Member
More scenes from Dead Horse State Park, Utah
Thanks for the suggestions, Jim! I love seeing what others see especially when it comes to composition. I'll play around with these some more!Hey Bob, a great series you got here. Dead Horse is a fun place that I stop in every year or two.
I like how you used that dead tree in #4, Thats something I also look for when I am there.
A couple of these for me, I think would look even nicer if they weren’t a pano. #2 I like quite a bit, but I think if you cropped off the right 1/3rd that the eye could focus more on those cool serrated edge bluffs on the left. Those are very interesting visually.
#3, I would lose that shadowed bluff on the left. To me its a distraction and draws the eye because it’s in shadow, but nothing else in the image is, and it feels cutoff. And I might crop a bit of the right side.
Anyway, I sure like these, but a little snipping on them could make them even better I think.