No. 3
- Thread starter Sunny Sra
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Aaron Macomber
Well-Known Member
Great job with the contrast on this, really get a sense of what that lifeguard looks at all day (rough job). Only thing I would consider looking at is the horizon, maybe some distortion correction and a re-level?
best, A
best, A
Good processing here Sunny
This is a good one from the archives. The B&W gives it a classic feel. I like the grasses in the foreground and those are cool clouds.
The horizon is unlevel as Aaron pointed out, so correct that. The horizon is at 50% which doesn't always work, but it seems fine here, perhaps because you have the lifeguard tower in the right 1/3rd horizontally, and the arching cloud in the left 1/3rd? They balance each other well.
The horizon is unlevel as Aaron pointed out, so correct that. The horizon is at 50% which doesn't always work, but it seems fine here, perhaps because you have the lifeguard tower in the right 1/3rd horizontally, and the arching cloud in the left 1/3rd? They balance each other well.
AlanLichty
Moderator
Nice scene and good work with the B&W conversion. Have to agree with Aaron and Jim on the horizon.
Bob Denton
Premium Member
This is great
Douglas Sherman
Staff
Excellent B&W, Sunny.Took this about 8 years ago and found this one that I just processed. Your comments and critique truly appreciated.
Carlo Didier
Well-Known Member
Top processing and nice composition. A winner.