Hey Tom, what a really cool capture! This angle captures the smiles on both boys and the mother biting her lip. I also like the couple in the upper left.
I like the processing in this, if there was any suggestions it would be not to have snipped the top of the heads of the couple in the upper left and not to have cropped off the boys and mothers legs. But with that said, I do really like how this is and the tighter crop does give a closer view of the family.