Hmmm... I like this that both the girl and the woman are looking out of the frame at something. I think the timing is perfect. The look is good, I don't think I can suggest anything.
I like how all three are looking off in the same direction, adds interest as in "what's going on"
It capture a familiar scene, but other than that, there's not much going on. Also the skin tone is off for my taste, to contrasty.
There is an issue with Uploading Photos (attachjments). I am not sure what the problem is, and I am looking into it. You can still try to Create your Threads and Upload your Photos, but it is hanging up during the Upload.