Hey Dan,
Sorry I had seen these but hadn't gotten back to commenting on them.
First, nice views in both of these. I like your compositions.
But, both of them you seem to have exposed for the reflection. Since reflections are usually 2 stops darker then the sky, it can be an issue when shooting with film. An ND grad sometimes can help, but can be tricky in compositions like these. But I think the loss of detail in the sky and rocks hurts these.
And you had been good with your color blindness correction, but both of these seem to have off color balance. Well, probably more so in #2 which has a distinct cyan cast.
When I switched from film to digital, one of the biggest bonuses I felt I gained in digital was scenes like these with reflections because of the difference in exposure between a reflection and the sky. It's so much easier to bracket and blend in digital. Though... I guess you could do the same with film now. Bracket two shots, one for the sky and one for the reflection, and then in Photoshop just blend them? You are processing them in Photoshop at the end anyway. At least that's a thought.