Cloudy Morning in Montabello California
- Thread starter David S
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Num 5 works best for me.
Interesting Dave. I will need to go with you sometimes as soon as I get done burning the candle from 3 ends....
my favorites are #2, 4 and 6.
a few suggestions.
In #3, having the woman on the left side instead of walking out of the frame would make all of the difference in the world and would allow the viewers eyes to go into the frame just as she was. In this, the eye immediately leaves the frame because the woman is leaving the frame.
#5, I kind of like the biker further away because it does kind of create a tunnel effect. But the biker is so far away it’s hard to get visually connected to it. I would prefer the biker to be closer to the viewer.
#7 feels unbalanced with that telephone pole smack dab center.
my favorites are #2, 4 and 6.
a few suggestions.
In #3, having the woman on the left side instead of walking out of the frame would make all of the difference in the world and would allow the viewers eyes to go into the frame just as she was. In this, the eye immediately leaves the frame because the woman is leaving the frame.
#5, I kind of like the biker further away because it does kind of create a tunnel effect. But the biker is so far away it’s hard to get visually connected to it. I would prefer the biker to be closer to the viewer.
#7 feels unbalanced with that telephone pole smack dab center.