Single subject.

Discussion in 'Critique of Photos' started by Ben Egbert, Sep 10, 2019.

  1. Ben Egbert

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    I seldom try to choose a single subject. I normally want the entire range of what the eye sees. So my images tend to be very wide angle and landscape cropped. I do try to eliminate distraction on the edges, but that is about all I do towards subject isolation.

    In this case, the subject was the Garden Wall at Glacier NP. It takes up the entire frame by itself.

    I wanted to see if this meets the definition of a single subject? I would personally prefer a colorful sky to go with it.

    All comments welcome and feel free to download and edit the image.

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    When I take a shot like this I like to pick out some elements that will help balance the frame. In this case I decided to take you up on posting suggested edits. I cropped to take out some of the empty sky and a bit of the wall on the right hand side to bring the viewer's focus more towards the nice shapes and contours of the ridge lines. I also gave a little more emphasis on the bit of exposed ridge behind the primary garden wall.

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    This might not be quite what you had in mind but it added more interest at least for my eyes.
     
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    Thanks Alan, just what I was hoping for. Looks good and I see what you were going for
     
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    Hey Ben, just a quick note before I head out the door.

    First, the lack of clouds here I think is a plus. Having clouds would distract from the wall and the details of the wall.

    Second, I like Alan's crop. It definitely has a very nice focus point now and it works really well.
     
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